Wednesday, 16 April 2014

Mia's writing

the rain
pitter patter pitter patter
goes the rain
pitter patter pitter patter
softly falling to the ground
pitter patter pitter patter
please don’t stop
pitter patter pitter patter
goes a big drop
pitter patter pitter patter
ya ya goes a happy farmer
pitter patter pitter patter
stay forever!
by Mia



Posted by at
Labels:

2 comments:

  1. Emily30 April 2014 at 02:12

    Nice work but you need capitals as you to work on. But great poem and nice words and cool pictures.:) By Emily

    ReplyDelete
  2. Anonymous13 June 2014 at 00:02

    Great poem Mia, I can hear the rain when I read it!
    Mum ox

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)